寫作佳句及慣用表達】?
1.Wealth and health are what everybody longs for.財富和健康是每個人渴望得到的.
2.No one knows the value of health until he loses it.直到有病才知道健康的寶貴.
3.If you become sick,it is nearly impossible to pursue your career effectively,much less make your dreams come true.如果病了,有效地干事業(yè)幾乎就不可能,更不用說使你夢想成真了.
4.When riches increase,the body decreases.(prov.)終生只恨積蓄少,待到多時眼閉了.
5.Some people have only one lifelong objective—to gain wealth even at the cost of their health.有些人一生只有一個目標——獲取財富,甚至不惜身體健康.
6.Health is wealth.(prov.) 健康就是財富?
7.Health is better than wealth.(prov.) 健康勝于財富.
8.Wealth is nothing without health.(prov.) 失去健康,空有家當.
9.Health and wealth create beauty.(prov.) 健康和財富創(chuàng)造美.
10.He who has health has hope,and he who has hope has everything.(prov.) 有健康即有希望,有希望即有一切.
【寫作范文】?
Some people believe that wealth can bring everything.And some people think that
health is above wealth.What is your opinion about it?
Write a composition of about 150 words on the following topic:
Wealth and Health?
Wealth and health are what everybody longs for.Some believe wealth means everything,thinking that with money they can get whatever they like.In order to make money,they are willing to do anything hard,humble,harmful,or even illegal.But the results usually turn out the opposite as they expected.
I think health is more important than wealth.Health is like the base of a building.Without good health,one cannot enjoy the pleasure brought by wealth.As a proverb goes,“ Health is above wealth.” It is true that one should be healthy first of all.If you are suffering from some disease,can you work energetically in your career?Money cannot buy health,but with good health,you can work hard to earn more money.
Therefore,you must keep healthy before you become wealthy.In order to be healthy,you should develop a good living habit and do physical exercise regularly.Remember the proverb “Health is not valued until sickness comes.”
【學習要點】?
① long for渴望得到?
② But the results usually turn out the opposite as they expected.結(jié)果往往事與愿違.
③ suffer from受…之苦,因…而不舒服；患（某種疾病）
【要點提示】?
⑴ 本文通過對比方法對“健康與財富”加以議論.文章首先舉出認為財富更重要的觀點,并舉出事實說明受這種觀念支配下的不良結(jié)果.然后作者引出與之對立觀點：健康比財富更重要,接著用了六個擴展句作為論據(jù),證明論點：健康比財富更重要.第一個論據(jù)是比喻.比喻是運用人們較熟悉而又容易?理解的具體事物,來論證人們較生疏、難懂的道理.把健康比做建筑物的基礎(chǔ),就把抽象的健康與具體的建筑物聯(lián)系起來,從而使讀者輕易理解健康與財富的關(guān)系.人們不難想象沒有健康如同建筑物沒有基礎(chǔ)一樣.擴展句⑥說明二者的關(guān)系.作者還用一格言作論據(jù),因格言是人們總結(jié)的經(jīng)驗.文章結(jié)尾用一格言,告誡人們不要等得了病才珍惜健康.文章論證用詞簡潔,句子結(jié)構(gòu)簡單,表達清楚.
⑵ 關(guān)聯(lián)詞：But（表示對比）,First of all（首先）,Therefore（表示結(jié)論：因此）,In order to（為了）.
【模擬訓練】?〔35 MIN.
Nowadays many people measure success by money.What is your opinion about this?
Write a composition of about 150 words on the following topic:
Can Success be Measured in Terms of Money Alone
You are to write in three paragraphs.
In the first paragraph,state your attitude.
In the second paragraph,state your reasons for your view.
In the last paragraph,bring what you have written to a natural conclusion.