1 my birthday is in September這句話很典型的中國式英語.雖沒有語法錯誤但不符合外國人說話習慣,可以說i was born in September.
2 I have no brother and sister這里的and應(yīng)該為or.
3 My favorite subject in school is English我覺得這句話in school 是多余的,和第一條理由一樣.
4 difficulty是名詞,應(yīng)用形容詞difficult.
5 like going to the movies應(yīng)該為like going tosee a film或者 like going to watch a movie .
6 And my favorite singer is(這個地方我不知道是用is還是are) SJ用is,因為他們是一個團體
7 Can you write to me soon? 也不是很合適,改為i hope you want to make friends wish me and write to me soon.比較好~
順便說一句,我也很喜歡浪漫滿屋~呵呵~希望回答對你有用~o(∩_∩)o...
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Dear Student,
Hey!My name is Susan.I live in Pingdu,China.I'm 14 years old and my birthday is in September.I can speak Chinese and a little English.I have no brother and sister.My favorite sport is basketball.My favorite subject in school is English.It's fun.But I don't like math,it's too difficulty.I like going to the movies with my friends and watching TV.My favorite music is U.And my favorite singer is(這個地方我不知道是用is還是are) SJ.My favorite soap operas are My Girl and Full House.My favorite fruits are apples and bananas.
Can you write to me soon?
Yous
Susan
PEN PAL WANTED
Dear Student,
Hey!My name is Susan.I live in Pingdu,China.I'm 14 years old and my birthday is in September.I can speak Chinese and a little English.I have no brother and sister.My favorite sport is basketball.My favorite subject in school is English.It's fun.But I don't like math,it's too difficulty.I like going to the movies with my friends and watching TV.My favorite music is U.And my favorite singer is(這個地方我不知道是用is還是are) SJ.My favorite soap operas are My Girl and Full House.My favorite fruits are apples and bananas.
Can you write to me soon?
Yous
Susan
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