麻煩你們幫我修改我造的英語(yǔ)句子..是寫(xiě)故事的.
when everyone coming ang going that my shadow borne trample 人來(lái)人往我的影子總承受著被別人踐踏/
nobody found to that my shadow became incomplete by trample 沒(méi)有人發(fā)現(xiàn)我被踐踏得殘缺的影子/
i look up the incomplete shadow and little by little corrode my heart 我看著殘缺的影子漸漸腐蝕我的心/
i felt disappointed.suddenly,my mobile telephone made a sound.我很失落.突然,手機(jī)響了/
the boss searching me .上司在找我./
i made up the mobile telephone and said to him' i would be goes back very quickly' 我接了電話跟他說(shuō)‘我要上去了’/
them i hand up directly the mobile telephone .就直接掛了/