我寫的一篇英語作文, 給我修改一下好嗎? 非常感謝你!
我寫的一篇英語作文, 給我修改一下好嗎? 非常感謝你!
My favourite season
Other people's favourite seasons are different from mine. I like summer best. Someone thinks summer is too hot. But I think it's so happy for me that during this season. Onother words, I enjoy myself in summer. I can eat ic-cream and swim in the cool sea. I also can have my longer holiday. I can play all day without having class. The watermelons are very sweet, too. So I love summer.
My favourite season
Other people's favourite seasons are different from mine. I like summer best. Someone thinks summer is too hot. But I think it's so happy for me that during this season. Onother words, I enjoy myself in summer. I can eat ic-cream and swim in the cool sea. I also can have my longer holiday. I can play all day without having class. The watermelons are very sweet, too. So I love summer.
英語人氣：304 ℃時間：2020-05-04 10:39:33
優(yōu)質(zhì)解答
去掉第一句.But I think一句有問題,建議改為But I think it's so happy to enjoy myself in summer.后一句自然去掉.I also 一句改為：I also can enjoy my long summer vacation.這樣更地道一些.后面幾句寫得很精彩,無需改動.解釋一下去掉第一句的原因：在英語思維里,這一句純屬多余,很不嚴密,因為喜歡夏天的人大有人在,這樣說會讓人感到莫名其妙,并且表達方式也是中國式英語,不好.
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