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My View on Friendship
In our world today,friendship has unconsciously become an important part of our lives.Everyday,we talk on the phone with friends,go to the mall with friends,and some of us even live with our friends.Friendship is one of the many wonders in this world.Without friends,many people would effortlessly perish in life's struggles.
Some people believe that friendship is essential in life,that without friends,one would be rendered useless and helpless.However,my view on friendship is,that although it is a valuable thing,one shouldn't weep endlessly when a friend leaves his or her side.Friendship to me is a gift in life,a gift that deserves to be cherished every second.Because to me,friendship is everlasting.
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