大家能幫看看我的語法有錯誤嗎?
we can make a comparison from the two pictures.the whole structure,including it's wing and tail even its head were imitated the bird.我想表達(dá)的意思是,從這兩張圖片的對比中我們可以發(fā)現(xiàn),飛機(jī)的整個結(jié)構(gòu),包括飛機(jī)的翅膀,尾翼,頭部都是在模仿鳥兒.我一直覺得最后一句的were imitated有點(diǎn)問題,我在這想用一個一般過去時,我是不是應(yīng)該要把were去掉,還是說把were換成are?怎么用比較好?或者說句子是對的?