幫我修改下英語作文
During
our daily life we can’t leave medicine,When you’re feeling uncomfortable,you
have must go to see a doctor If you are seriously ill.All in all,public
health is directly related to medical.Medicine is a abstract scientific,in
the world today,health is the most precious wealth of life.That’s the reason why I want to study for an medicine.In addition,ever since I was ten years
ago,I’ve dreamt of becoming a doctor.Therefore,I have been working hard for
my dream,after two years of hard study.I has to lay a solid foundation.So,I
believe .I have the conditions to learn it well.I believe .where there is a
will,there is a way.
在我們的日常生活中我們不能離醫(yī)學,當你感覺不舒服或者你病得很重就必須去看醫(yī)生.總之,醫(yī)療關乎人類的健康.醫(yī)學是一個深奧的科學,在當今世界,健康是人生最寶貴的財富.這就是我選擇讀醫(yī)學的原因.此外,自從我是十年前,我夢想成為一名醫(yī)生.因此,我一直為我的夢想努力學習,經(jīng)過兩年的努力學習.我已經(jīng)打下了堅實的基礎.所以,我相信.我有條件學好它.我相信.有志者事竟成.