見(jiàn)笑：
This is a simple demo from ysy as a test for pop-up.In this demo you may find many bugs and errors which I can not spare .And I do hope you just take it as a demo.Thank you for supporting.
關(guān)于你的語(yǔ)病：
1、which is a example ,a 應(yīng)為an
2、there are too many bugs and errors which I can not save it.這句中多了個(gè)it,把it 去掉,否則為病句.
3、make 用詞不當(dāng),把.當(dāng)做.,應(yīng)該用take
4、這個(gè)不是病句,只是Thank you for your supports.英語(yǔ)里比較不喜歡一個(gè)單詞反復(fù)選用,所以前面有了you,后面再有your比較累贅,當(dāng)然,不算錯(cuò).
5、不過(guò),支持該是不可數(shù)名詞吧?不該是your supports的,應(yīng)去掉“s”.