Today I read "the ugly duckling" this piece of fairy tales.After reading it,I very:the ugly duckling was a everywhere to be excluded of duck,but it has a wonderful dream,it is the dream to make it indomitable struggle,became a beautiful white swan.In fact,in our real life,how many people is not the little ugly duck?We are students,is the vast learn the sea of the ugly duckling,and the knowledge short and shallow,but we want to have a dream,is determined to get into a famous university,and towards our dream hard effort.We must take the motherland's hope,parents of expectations,to fly to the happy tomorrow!Come on,what's the problem,what sad,what annoyed,throw them,let's open our wings fly!Teacher comment on:the author heart full of ambition,especially reading "the ugly duckling" this article after the fairy tale,feeling more.Don't for his own defects and trouble,as long as the heart to have hope,and the little ugly duck will be ideal.The author USES short text to the readers hope,like the white swan wings to fly as.
今天我讀了《丑小鴨》這篇童話故事.讀完后,我深有感觸：丑小鴨是一只處處受排擠的鴨子,但它卻懷有一份美好的夢想,正是這份夢想讓它不屈的奮斗,成了一只美麗的白天鵝.實(shí)際上,在我們的現(xiàn)實(shí)生活中,有多少人不是丑小鴨呢?我們是學(xué)生,是茫茫學(xué)海里的丑小鴨,知識短淺,但我們要擁有夢想,立志考上一所名牌大學(xué),并朝著我們的夢想努力的拼搏.我們一定能帶著祖國的希望,父母的期盼,飛向美好的明天!來吧,什么難題,什么傷心,什么懊惱,拋開它們,讓我們張開翅膀飛起來吧!名師點(diǎn)評：作者心中充滿了雄心壯志,特別是在讀了《丑小鴨》這篇童話故事后,感觸更深.不要為自己的缺陷而煩惱,只要心中有希望,就一定和丑小鴨一樣會(huì)實(shí)現(xiàn)理想.作者用簡短的文字給了讀者希望,要像白天鵝一樣張開翅膀去飛翔.