寫的還好,不過有幾點語病：because without them最好改成without them因為because是連詞,后面應接句子而不能接借此短語,without them是介詞短語作原因狀語；we have nobody to share in the happiness and the sadness of the life最好改成we have nobody to share my feeling in my life；much things最好改成many things,因為much修飾不可數(shù)名詞的吧；we can get a lot of knowledge what school can't teach us.應該成we can get a lot of knowledge that school can't teach us.因為這里的that引導的是定語從句,而不能用what,what只能引導名詞性從句.
最后祝愿您有大進步,我也正在學習英語.
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As we know,friends are very important for us.We need friends,because without them,we'll feel lonely,we have nobody to talk to,we have nobody to share in the happiness and the sadness of the life; With our friends,we feel good,we can learn much things,we can get a lot of knowledge what school can't teach us.
As we know,friends are very important for us.We need friends,because without them,we'll feel lonely,we have nobody to talk to,we have nobody to share in the happiness and the sadness of the life; With our friends,we feel good,we can learn much things,we can get a lot of knowledge what school can't teach us.
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