My dream(By Kaiser3344)　　I am an ordinary person,I have an ordinary dream:Is a doctor.　　Because doctor may let these experience personally the human which the indisposition suffers to get rid of t...能不能再寫多點(diǎn)？謝謝！my dreamWhen I was a little girl, I had a dream to be a famous writer. I remembered that I made a big decision to realize my dream that I started my first writing of a novel. I was a skinny little school-girl with glasses who dreamt up characters with qualities I longed to embody – they were pretty and powerful and lived lives full of intrigue and drama. After I finished high school, although that story like most of my writings ended up unfinished and stayed in the bottom of my desk drawers, I enjoyed and made fun of my writings when I read them later. Now I am a college student majored in engineering who studies science and math everyday. In the mean time, I am trying to bring my first book to an end. I have been always thinking why we couldn’t take our dreams into our own hands. I would encourage everybody to find ways to live their dreams, whether on a small scale – like my writing of a novel – or a bigger scale, like going after a job we have always wanted. I am living with part of my little passion, in my own way.原來樓主要多的，這篇字?jǐn)?shù)應(yīng)該夠了，多多支持！您能不能在您發(fā)的第一篇作文的基礎(chǔ)上再加點(diǎn)字呀?謝謝。Kaiser3344:　　I am an ordinary person, I have an ordinary dream: Is a doctor.　　Because doctor may let these experience personally the human which the indisposition suffers to get rid of the pain.A doctor must be professionally trained and must strickly follow the occupational rules. When he works, he should as carefully as possible and treat his patient patiently. When he finds something abnormal, he should react quickly. If there is something he don't understand, he can ask other experts humbly and improve his knowledge accordingly. That is what a doctor should do perfectly。　　May let the human change the health. At the same time, I believed that, will help others, own also to be able to obtain joyfully. Therefore, I hoped future I might be a doctor.補(bǔ)充部分翻譯：當(dāng)一個(gè)醫(yī)生,必須是受過專業(yè)訓(xùn)練的,必須嚴(yán)格遵守職業(yè)規(guī)則。當(dāng)他的作品,他應(yīng)該一樣認(rèn)真對待他的病人可能的,耐心的人。當(dāng)他發(fā)現(xiàn)有異常,他應(yīng)該快速的反應(yīng)力。如果有某件事時(shí),他不明白,他可以要求其他專家謙遜地提高自己的知識進(jìn)行相應(yīng)的調(diào)整。這是一個(gè)醫(yī)生應(yīng)該做到完美。樓主可根據(jù)需要自行刪減，不影響行文?。?！