第二句多了個(gè)“the hardest so”,把它改成："The donkey worked the hardest so the farmer fed it the most food." 下一句“sometime”改成sometimes,some time是某個(gè)時(shí)候的意思,可是這句子里的意思是由時(shí)候,sometimes是正確的意思.然后在“given much food”改成“given much more food”.“much food”本身是錯(cuò)的,語(yǔ)法上的錯(cuò)誤,需加個(gè)more.“jealius”應(yīng)該是jealous,你拼錯(cuò)了.“they began plotting”應(yīng)該改成“he”.這里只有一只goat所以不能用they,they是指很多只羊.“I thought”改成"I think".“You carry such heavy thing from morning to night .Why don't you pretend to get sick but you can take a day off?"里的"thing"改成things,把句號(hào)改成逗號(hào).前面那一句本身不是完整的句子,所以把前后兩句聯(lián)在一起會(huì)比較好.“thought it great idea”改成thought it was a great idea.idea是個(gè)名詞,名詞前加個(gè)"a".was是助動(dòng)詞,每個(gè)句子里都需要有助動(dòng)詞的."who said it was needed" 這里的was多余了.最后一句,雖然語(yǔ)法上沒(méi)有說(shuō)不能用so來(lái)開(kāi)始一個(gè)句子,大部分的英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)文教授的人為用so來(lái)當(dāng)開(kāi)頭不太恰當(dāng).能把so改成thus之類的詞會(huì)適當(dāng)些.thus有因此于是的意思.