語(yǔ)法問(wèn)題 文章很不流暢 措辭不好
比如第一句改為“ opportunity is one of the elements of success”較好
“Do you think so.”一定要加so.
“in the world”要加冠詞
“He must had trained very hard everyday”
“at last ”
“ Whe he retired,he seted up a compay called Lining-sport”
“he successed Because many consumers love it”
“If Lining hadn't trained so hard ,He would not set up sunch a succesful comopany.”
“Only if We stand up to it can we find opportunity”
英語(yǔ)作文,幫我看看語(yǔ)法有沒(méi)有問(wèn)題,
英語(yǔ)作文,幫我看看語(yǔ)法有沒(méi)有問(wèn)題,
The opportunity is element of success.The opportunity always love person who he has prepared.Do you think?
For example Lining is a formous sporter in world.He must hard train everyday.In last,he won eight gold medals in olympic games.Whe he retired,he seted up a compay.Be called Lining-sport.Because many consumers love it.so he successed.If Lining did not hard train.He did not set up comopany.So opportunity always love person who he has prepared.
Meanwhile,opportunity is hidden in setback.We can only stand up to it.We can find opportunity.Edison is a fomous inventor in world.He wanted to invent electric light.He always failed at the start.he facted many setback.But he did not give up.At last,he found a chemist element.When he used this chemist element,he invented the eletric light.So when we face setback,we can not give up.We must stand up to it.Because opportunity is hidden in setback.
From what has been mentioned above we can come to the conclusion that opportunity is necessary,however,we must stand up to setback and strive.
The opportunity is element of success.The opportunity always love person who he has prepared.Do you think?
For example Lining is a formous sporter in world.He must hard train everyday.In last,he won eight gold medals in olympic games.Whe he retired,he seted up a compay.Be called Lining-sport.Because many consumers love it.so he successed.If Lining did not hard train.He did not set up comopany.So opportunity always love person who he has prepared.
Meanwhile,opportunity is hidden in setback.We can only stand up to it.We can find opportunity.Edison is a fomous inventor in world.He wanted to invent electric light.He always failed at the start.he facted many setback.But he did not give up.At last,he found a chemist element.When he used this chemist element,he invented the eletric light.So when we face setback,we can not give up.We must stand up to it.Because opportunity is hidden in setback.
From what has been mentioned above we can come to the conclusion that opportunity is necessary,however,we must stand up to setback and strive.
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