請(qǐng)英文好的朋友幫助修改一下英文作文的錯(cuò)誤.
Useem (2010) argues that to reach this goal,it is significant to have avery strong team spirit without personal gain to reach this goal.Todemonstrate how to focus on mission,an executive team from one of America's biggestfinancial institution undertake a Leadership Reaction course.Useem relates thelessons about how to make a group of bank manager successfully complete aprofessional military training.The course include of aseries of military obstacles,such as across a gap when the necessary materialsmaynot stick.Meanwhile the leader of the groups have to care about the traps,suchas the ‘red paint’ which could make you lose your members.