My classmate WangLi,whose works（work改為works,作品是works不是work） was published on the school net,won the first prize in our school"s calligraphy competition.Some students hold the opinions that learnig calligraphy is extraordinarily（extrordinary拼寫錯(cuò)誤,應(yīng)是extraordinarily,副詞才對） important, for it can develop our Chinese traditional cultures.In recent years,many traditional things have been lost （lose改為lost,被動(dòng)語態(tài)） sight of,especially by adolescent.Others,who have the opposite ideas that as the paperless offices become more and more popular,we spend（spent改為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)spend,與前面as從句的become時(shí)態(tài)相一致） little time in paper-（writing分為有紙書寫和無紙書寫,加上paper-,以與無紙書寫區(qū)分）writing.So,it's not neccessary to pratise calligraphy.
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My classmate WangLi,whose works was published on the school net,won the first prize in our school"s calligraphy competition.Some students hold the opinions that learnig calligraphy is extraordinarily important, for it can develop our Chinese traditional cultures.In recent years,many traditional things have been lost sight of,especially by adolescent.Others,who have the opposite ideas that as the paperless offices become more and more popular,we spend little time in paper-writing.So,it's not neccessary to pratise calligraphy