一篇簡短的英語class report,求修改
英語課上要播放幻燈片和音樂,口頭說下面的句子,英語很爛,（格式之類沒注意）跪求修改語病等
Hey,guys today I’ll introduce my favorite writer to you
She named 三毛 and her English name is echo ,well my English name is echo too
She has special beauty with long hair and the biggest smile
The song you hearing is written by her
I love her best because she told me hot to be the pure water in the desert
This is her husband 荷西 a hot 、humourous、responsible man I think his beard is sexy
They live in my heart forever
At last,i will send a word to you ：
Everyday eat a candy and then tell yourself - today is sweet again as expected
——Echo
（每天吃一顆糖然后告訴自己今天果然又是甜的）
這句話要打出來,中間的“-”用的對不對 這句話有無問題
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