幫我檢查一下我寫的這篇英語作文（初一的）“My family day”
My family day
My father usually gets up at six thirty.But my mother usually gets up at seven thirty .At eight o'clock,my father and my mother eat breastfast.Then my father usually goes to work at eight thirty.My mother usually takes a shower at eight thirty.At nine o'clock,my father is still working,my mother shops for the vegetable .My father gets home at eleven o'clock.My mother goes to cook our lunch at eleven o'clock .In the afternoon,my father goes to work at fourteen o'clock ,and gets home at nineteen o'clock .My mother goes to work at thirteen o'clock and goes home at twenty o'clock.We usually eat dinner at twenty-one o'clock and go to bed at twenty-two o'clock.
文章的漢語內(nèi)容就不用了,就看一下語法啊拼寫啊,用法這些的,
我知道有點長，可是請大家認真一點檢查。尤其這句“At nine o'clock,my father is still working,my mother shops for the vegetable ”
二樓，正是因為我寫的英文作文不好所以才要練習、修改，我又不是因為要分數(shù)才寫的。