希望英語達人幫忙修改一下我寫的一段很短的演講稿吧 急!
Good afternoon,ladies and gentlemen.Today I will give the speech about my favourate music.All over the world people listen to the music,and everybody has taste for different types of music.I love Jazz.Jazz originated from Blues,and it is a kind of folk music created by slaves who used to live in the South Africa.I really like a singer called Ono Lisa,she isthe queen of Bossa Nova.[放音樂]The song's name is La Vie En Rose,it's a beautiful and gentle song, When Lisa starts singing,I always can't help closing my eyes and singing along.[音樂完畢] Ono Lisa is a great singer,I believe she will creat more beautiful songs for us.That's all,thank you!
明天就要課前演講啦 主講自己喜歡的音樂類型和歌曲以及歌手 大概兩分鐘以內(nèi) 希望大家?guī)臀铱匆豢?不用客氣的修改一下
如果里面有語法問題或者語句表達不清晰的 也請幫我修改一下吧
而且中間有可以添加充實內(nèi)容的地方還是請幫再我加一點吧
謝謝各位英語達人啦!^_^