上面那位兄弟是要誤人前程呀,只會(huì)夸人,對(duì)他真正考試有用么?恕我直言,這篇文章要得高分是不可能的,而且10分里8分也拿不到.就拿第一段為例：For children,whether parenting or schooling should responsible to culti...我覺得你分析得太好了?。。∧懿荒茉賻兔ο旅娴闹刚?我會(huì)再給20分。。。過兩天要考試了。。。希望幫忙一下 謝謝算了，好人做到底，給你再改完吧T(t)hose who BELIEVE that parents should teach their children hold the views as follows: Firstly,parents exert potential impacts on children as children stay longer with their parents.As a result,parents are able to set A good example for their KIDS,helping the KIDS to build up AN active philosophy of life.Secondly,parents pay for everything for their children,including FOOD, CLOTHING, SCHOOL AND OTHER expenseS.Children,undoubtedly,TEND TO SEEK parents' advices before they take any action(s).In this way,parents CAN play the role OF A (as the)GUARDIAN and they,actually,should be blamed if THEIR children go astray . MEANWHILE, SOME OTHERS HOLD A DIFFERENT VIEW.THEY SAY THAT schools,where children acquire a variety of knowledge (from),are JUST LIKE a society in miniature,AND THEY SHOULD HELP THE children cultivateA sense of cooperation and responsibility which IS beneficial to the whole sociey.Furthermore, teachers CANinsTill the moral valueS to children WITH examples from all WALKS of life AT home and abroad. Thus,children could be inspired and learn how to FACE difficulties in theIR future life. Additionally,schoolS POSSESS ( can afford) ALL kinds of infrastructure THAT (which) can't be FOUND IN NORMAL HOUSEHOLDS (replace by home),such as THE library ,gym as well as multi-media classroom,WHERE (by these can) children CAN expand THEIR HORIZONS(outlooks,) AND GAIN (work out their) physical STRENGTH(body).Last but not the least,children DEVELOP THEIR (weave personal network in school,the strong personal relationship and) social skills IN SCHOOLS, WHICH CAN HELP THEM TO BETTER ADAPT TO THE SOCIETY (contribute to work) when they grow up.All in all,as i see it,we should combine schooling and parenting together,WHILE other FORMS OF education COULD ALSO BE APPLIED if necessary.It WOULD BE seriousLY wrong AND DANGEROUS to LIMIT (attribute) the education OF OUR CHILDREN TO ONLY ONE SINGLE WAY （to any of them).這么辛苦，快加分。