錯誤處在括號處注明.
Last Sunday,Linda went to the park by bike at 11 am.The weather was nice.Some people were swimming in the river.While Linda was watching the people,a boy got out of the trees.He (rode) Linda's bicycle away after 10 minutes.But Linda didn't know.
It was time to have lunch.Linda wanted to ride her bicycle (to go) home.But she couldn't find (it).Then she (cried) while she was calling the police.
1.整篇為一般過去時,所以用ride的過去式rode；
2.get home為“到家”,不如go home“去/回家”更通順；
3.cry動作發(fā)生在call the police動作期間,所以前者用一般過去時,而后者用過去進(jìn)行時.
4.此文有些單詞短語重復(fù)使用,比如her bicycle,所以有時候能換種說法（比如改成it）.