你是不是想表達(dá)：“比較一下這兩臺(tái)電腦,這一臺(tái)更貴一點(diǎn)”?英語不是這么說的,這是標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的中式英語.更好一點(diǎn)的表達(dá)可以這么說：When comparing these two computers, this one is much more expensive.

再加一個(gè)one就對(duì)了 This is the more expensive one of the two computers

This is the more expensive of the two comparing with the computers. 這句話表達(dá)就有錯(cuò)誤,而且容易產(chǎn)生歧義.compare表示比較,compare with sth. 表示同···作比較,而且必須是同一類.如果你用comparing 則表示比較的主體是主動(dòng)的,而電腦則是被比較的.要么你就把with去掉,要么就改成Compared with these computers, this is the more expensive one of the two.