One afternoon my father and (went) fishing on a riverside .We found the water was (so) dirty that we could not see (the) bottom.We saw some rubbish (and) (dead) fish floating on the water (as) well .That afternoon ,my father and I caught only a (small) fish .Why did fish in the river die That was because (delete the "of" here) a lot of factories along the river always poured (its) waste water (delete the "at" here) and rubbish into the river .In this way ,the water got (polluted).Thus,most of the fish in the river was killed.
there you go,i kindda fixed that for ya...
you know,if i were you,i'd dump that article in your teacher's face and tell him not to misguide his students anymore.the whole writing's pointless and sounds totally like Chinese...
i can't believe the teacher choose such garbage as students' homework...
真的,這文章太坑人了,哪有這么說話的啊,簡直不說人話嘛.給孩子留作業(yè)起碼弄個正規(guī)英文讀物啊,這樣的東西讀多了還怎么學正經(jīng)英語啊.