我覺得首先你要找出關(guān)鍵詞翻譯出來,比如 過生日 Bithday celebration;送賀卡send birthday card ;去飯店 eat out 等等
然后根據(jù)你的描述,文章框架三段就好了,中間用 and ,while ,not onlybut also等等連詞連接起來再加上你自己的觀點(diǎn)就好了
附范文一篇供參考：
Comments on Middle School Students's Bithday Celebrations
It's very popular for middle school students's to have their birthday celebrations these days.Some will send birthday cards to give their good wishes,others will choose to eat out.
Those who share the same opinion think it is not only a good chance to promote friendship,but also to relax;while others argue against this,they are afraid that the students will compare with each other about the cards and the restaurants,thus it will be a cost of money ,what's worse ,it will have a bad effect on them for their study and development.
In my point of view,just like the old saysing goes:every coin has two sides,so when you hold a bithday celebration,you should think about it carefully,such as how many money I can use,which restaurant will be fine for me.Use this chance to give thanks to your family,friends and those helped you before.Do not make it a money wasting thing.
All in all,Hope everyone will enjoy it and use this chance appropriately.