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The Chicago city is located in USA Illinois – IL State Northeast, one of USA Great Lakes Michigan southwest bank. Alternative name: Wind city , second cities , Chi Town , The City That Works,etc.Its city flower is a chrysanthemum. Norman • Mobilizing writes road: "Chicago is great one USA city; it maybe is great USA rare survival city ". Chicago is also praised for top-ten the better-off the whole world cities, the Chicago horizon line also is one of top-ten the whole world horizon lines.
Shanghai is China the first big cities, eighth largest city in the world one of, four Chinese central authority municipality directly under the Central Government. Have exceeding 20 million populations living in Shanghai and their nearby regions with life. Shanghai is located in Chinese eastern China, being located in the Yangtze River and Huangpu River enters the sea confluence place, is Yangtze River delta alluvial plain part. Public Shanghai East of Yellow River international airport Shanghai city traffic, whose circuit, vehicle, carry amounts passengers living in the whole nation without exception the first. The Shanghai city labels white Yulan with the triangle pattern, city flower being to be composed of city flower white Yulan, sand boat and propeller triple. Shanghai is also one history civilization of long standing city.