a day after my laser treatment, I still worried about the stain on my face. 求指點(diǎn)語法錯誤.
我寫的一段日記,主要講我去九院做激光祛斑后非常擔(dān)心治療沒做好. 希望指點(diǎn)語法錯誤,謝謝.
Today is Saturday, a day after my laser treatment, I still worried about the stain on my face, because( it seemed hasn't ) any sign of scab. (它看起來并沒有結(jié)痂的跡象)The stain (where) I have done the laser treatment feels as soft as the surrounding skin on my face.
Due to concerned about this, I went to the ninth people's hospital again. When i saw the doctor who made the treatment for me , She said my stain recovered very well.Then she told me to take it easy and don't always look in the mirror.
Now i was home, I still nervous about it but feel a bit of relief to the anxiety.
括號的部分是自己感覺有點(diǎn)語法錯誤的地方.
括號中是需要修改之處 【原文】Today is Saturday, (a day) after my laser treatment,【點(diǎn)評】 a day after my laser treatment 是對前面特定時間Saturday作出的具體說明,是同位語,a day 需要改為 the ...謝謝1.I am still (worried形容詞)。 worry可作動詞, 用i still worry about it 可否 ? 2. it (seemed) that there isn’t any sign of scab；seemed過去式,that的從句需用過去式嗎? 3. due to my (concern) about this. concern是名詞,沒謂語?
worry 作為及物動詞表示“使某人擔(dān)心/煩惱/憂慮”，常用 be worred about（主動為 worry sb. about sth）；不及物動詞表示“操心/不安/焦慮”，可以用 worry about，沒有被動形式。
是我的筆誤，此處應(yīng)該用現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，表示此時此刻似乎如何。如果主句用過去時 seemed，從句應(yīng)該與該時態(tài)保持一致。
concern 是名詞， about sth. 是 concern 的后置定語，構(gòu)成名詞短語，意思是“對...的關(guān)心/關(guān)注”
Then she told me to take it easy and (don't) always look in the mirror.[點(diǎn)評]引用的是大夫意思，要用過去時.told me to的"to"后面要跟動詞原型嗎? and表示并列,是不是不能用didn't always look ... 跟to后面時態(tài)一致?
tell sb. to do sth. 表示告訴某人做某事，不定式短語 to take it easy 是賓語補(bǔ)足語，即“告訴”賓語“我放下心來”
其實(shí)此處我也說錯了，后面的 always look in the mirror 應(yīng)該與 to take it easy 并列，即大夫告訴兩件事，“別總照鏡子”是第二件。所以此句要改為 she told me to take it easy and not always to look in the mirror