Every time when we read a book and see something meaningful,we would think a lot.which helps us reveal something new of value in the dull routine of everyday life.In this way,we will have the power of thinking.But then what will this do?
The power of thinking helps people think dynamic.It is normal that water is boiling when it reaches proper temperature,but Watt took in a very difficult problem.He thought about it for hundreds of times and finally invented the steam engine based on the method with which it has opperated.The power of thinking punishes people who don't want to think.Newton,a great physicist who found out gravity in his youth,chose to doubt about all his achievements and stop thinking for the rest of his life.He made himself a joke for everybody to laugh at.
We are not born to be knowledgeble.As a student,we should make full use of what we have learnt and mastered and use our brain to think more so that the power of thinking will help us succeed in the future..
你寫的不錯,good essay感謝您的回復(fù) 在原文中：“but Watt took it a huge problem.”的表達(dá)不知是否正確，而您的答案中“but Watttook in a very difficult problem.”似乎看得不是太懂，能否解釋一下這個詞組的用法take it a huge problem.it 是多余的 ，不要只是指什么， take 沒有【拿】和【接受】的意思， 我覺得用huge 這詞太大了take in 有接受的意思 可接名詞，So， 我用了Watt took in a very difficult problem. 沒那么夸張。語法也正確，僅此而已。 Your article is very nice, smooth andlogical.the exppresons you use is very neat. It is abetter article than...........Enjoy your English.