請給我看一下這篇英語作文,改一下語法錯誤,
請給我看一下這篇英語作文,改一下語法錯誤,
Nowadays,Shanghai is really an attractive city with many landmarks.Every year,many visitors come to visit Shanghai.If someone comes to Shanghai,he may go to the Oriental Pearl TV Tower.It’s one of the tallest buildings in Shanghai,also in the world.Shanghai is a modern city,it’s known as the Shopping Paradise.We can buy many things from all over the world in Nanjing Road.It’s the busiest street in Shanghai.And we will have a Disney Park in Shanghai in the future.At that time,Shanghai must be an attractive city.
Nowadays,Shanghai is really an attractive city with many landmarks.Every year,many visitors come to visit Shanghai.If someone comes to Shanghai,he may go to the Oriental Pearl TV Tower.It’s one of the tallest buildings in Shanghai,also in the world.Shanghai is a modern city,it’s known as the Shopping Paradise.We can buy many things from all over the world in Nanjing Road.It’s the busiest street in Shanghai.And we will have a Disney Park in Shanghai in the future.At that time,Shanghai must be an attractive city.
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Shanghai is a modern city,it’s known as the Shopping Paradise.這句可能有點錯誤.這句話有兩個主語,雖然主語是一樣的.但最好中間添加連接詞如and,或改為從句形式,如Shanghai,which is known as the Shopping Par...
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