第一行第四個單詞改成your ,
I am responding your booking confirming一般回信不這樣說.可以改為 I'm writing to you for your booking confirmation.
Due to 后面不能接從句.可以改成：Due to our supplier's visiting our company on .
第四句簡單一點,直接說23 people will attend .
which shold the best in your hotel 你想表達最好在你們酒店,對嗎?可以改成：It's much better in your hotel.
I really apperiate you've done for us.這句的意思是他已經(jīng)為你做了.改成：I really apperiate what you do for us.
最后一行,問題的單詞寫錯了.
供你參考,
幫我看看這封英文信有什么錯誤!
幫我看看這封英文信有什么錯誤!
Dear Mr Williams
Thank you for you kind reply,I am responding your booking confirming.Due to our supplier will vist our compant on 17th November,There will be 23 people who wil attentd.Could you please prepar 8-course lunch for us,which shold the best in your hotel.I really apperiate you've done for us.
If you have any queries,Please contact me.I look forward to hearing form you.
Yours sincerely
Tim Jones
Dear Mr Williams
Thank you for you kind reply,I am responding your booking confirming.Due to our supplier will vist our compant on 17th November,There will be 23 people who wil attentd.Could you please prepar 8-course lunch for us,which shold the best in your hotel.I really apperiate you've done for us.
If you have any queries,Please contact me.I look forward to hearing form you.
Yours sincerely
Tim Jones
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