英語老師幫忙看下我寫的這篇短文哈,有錯(cuò)誤的地方幫忙改下,或者怎么表達(dá)會(huì)更好.
作文題是
假設(shè)你是華華,與英國網(wǎng)友湯姆約定用對(duì)方的母語通信,以提高各自的外語水平.最近你收到湯姆的電子郵件（附后）,發(fā)現(xiàn)有一個(gè)成語使用不當(dāng).請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn),用英文回一封電子郵件.
要點(diǎn):
1．不應(yīng)使用 “無所不為”,應(yīng)使用 “無所事事”;
2．說明這兩個(gè)成語的用法;
3．給予鼓勵(lì).
注意:1.詞數(shù)為100左右;
2.參考釋義:無所不為一do all kinds of bad things
無所事事一have nothing to do
3.除以上兩個(gè)成語外,郵件中不得使用其它漢字或拼音;
4.電子郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好（不計(jì)人你所寫詞數(shù)）,但不得抄人答題卡.
附（湯姆的郵件）:
近幾天在忙什么事?有什么有意思的事嗎?我們的學(xué)校放假了,所以這幾天在家無所不為,飽食終日,只好上網(wǎng)發(fā)伊妹兒.沒意思.我決定找份工作,做個(gè)自食其力的人.祝好!
湯姆
（以下所給內(nèi)容不得抄入答題卡）
Hi!Tom
Nice to read your e-mail today.I noticed you’ve begun to use Chinese idioms used most of them correctly.
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Hope you’ll find a good job soon.
Huahua
我的作文..(開頭結(jié)尾省去）
In general,this e-mail you wrote is prefect,but only have a little problem,I think it is likely ''無所事事''that you would express,rather than ''無所不為'',''無所不為''means do all kinds of bad things,you see,if you put it on your composition,it will make no sense at all,however,''無所事事''means have nothing to do,do you kown it As a matterof fact,Chinese,most people to say,is not more than difficult,only if you try your best to make yourself understood,it is easy
Finally,I hope you can make your dream comes true,hope you will happy all the time