一篇高三英語(yǔ)作文求修改
是說(shuō)現(xiàn)在有很多學(xué)生補(bǔ)課.有贊同和反對(duì)的兩種意見(jiàn),分別寫(xiě)出至少兩個(gè)理由,還有自己的觀點(diǎn).只是一篇作文,希望能幫我支出搭配錯(cuò)誤,單詞用法和句型等.謝謝了!省略號(hào)是用來(lái)分段的,這樣看起來(lái)方便些 .Faced with great pressure of competitions, many students participate forcedly in various training classes, which occupy them much time. Given this situation, there are two different voices. .Some people are in favor of taking part in training class. They have strong belief that their child will obtain more knowledge in this way. Meanwhile, they‘ll get strong learning abilities. .Other people, while, don't think it's a good idea. Having much homework to do isn't easy, adding more after-school study is harder. Moreover, heavy learning task would result in student hating learning. .As far as I’m concerned, treating training class reasonably is proper choice for us. Only combine rest and study can we make great progress.