《Travel by plane》
As far as we know,traveling by plane is very enjoyable and fantastic,but it is a little expensive and dangerous,Someone maybe afraid of by plane,they feel scard when they are in the sky,because it is too high.But from my point of view,I like traveling by plane,because it make me feel comfortable and relaxing.Can you image that when you look out the window,the sky is beautiful,it as blue as sea.The cloud is as white as milk,very lovely .Sometimes you can see birds flying in the sky.How beautiful the view is!What a amazing traveling!That's why I like traveling by plane,it is my favourite trasport.
批改方式：復(fù)制一遍并且在錯(cuò)誤的地方的后面打括號(hào),括號(hào)里面寫(xiě)糾正的東西