.樓上的那個完全是改錯了= = 人家時態(tài)好好的.
第二行,beacasue,應該是because
第三行,對的,first改firstly+“,”會比較好；然后應該jump better and farther,不是longer.
we were asked to be ready= =.這里有一個準備的過程,be ready 十分生硬.改get ready.
!后面,it was my turn.輪到我了.沒有it turned to me這種說法.
.后面一句.I looked at the pathway(更具象一點,通路而不要泛指“路”) and had my first try.
Practice makes perfect.沒有the
然后初中作文的話這樣改就可以了,要求沒必要更高了.
初中英語作文,總考不好,
初中英語作文,總考不好,
One sunny afternoon ,we had a PE lesson.We gathered on the playground.The teacher told us that we would learn the long jump .I began to feel nervous beacasue l was afraid of falling .First teacher showed us how to jump better and longer.Then we were asked to be ready.After a moment,it turned to me .l looked at the way and tried my first time .Unfortunately,l failed and fell down .My friend and the teacher encouraged me .l felt powerful again,and tried again.At last ,l jumped over 3 meters!l was so happy that l couldn't say a word.Yes,l succeeded!As the saying goes,'Practise makes the perfect!'
One sunny afternoon ,we had a PE lesson.We gathered on the playground.The teacher told us that we would learn the long jump .I began to feel nervous beacasue l was afraid of falling .First teacher showed us how to jump better and longer.Then we were asked to be ready.After a moment,it turned to me .l looked at the way and tried my first time .Unfortunately,l failed and fell down .My friend and the teacher encouraged me .l felt powerful again,and tried again.At last ,l jumped over 3 meters!l was so happy that l couldn't say a word.Yes,l succeeded!As the saying goes,'Practise makes the perfect!'
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