有語法錯(cuò)誤嗎My ambition is to become a scientist.As a child,I had many dreams,but becoming scientist is the most thing I want

有語法錯(cuò)誤嗎My ambition is to become a scientist.As a child,I had many dreams,but becoming scientist is the most thing I want to be.
I learned a lot through books and Internet,wishing to get much knowledge on the science.I think scientist has more influence on the society.If I can be a scientist,I can contribute to my motherland.The goal of our life is to do more for the harmony happiness of the society.I hope my ambition and dream can come true.I am willing to study hard and become a scientist in the future.

英語人氣：104 ℃時(shí)間：2020-09-30 03:32:33

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As a child是“作為一個(gè)孩子”,我覺得你的意思是"當(dāng)我還是個(gè)孩子時(shí)候",when I was a child;
but becoming scientist is the most thing I want to be.改為but becoming a scientist was my biggest dream.更通順些；
I learned a lot through books and (the) Internet
I think (a) scientist has more influence on the society.
The goal of our life is to do more for the harmony happiness of the society這句中harmony 是名詞,不知道你為什么還在后面加上happiness,應(yīng)該去掉吧
暫時(shí)就看出這些

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有語法錯(cuò)誤嗎My ambition is to become a scientist.As a child,I had many dreams,but becoming scientist is the most thing I want

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