Yet it did not seem to her that he was even slightly mad;
然而在她看來,他根本就沒有瘋.
（這是個主語從句,it放句首作形式主語,真正的主語是that he was even slightly mad）
but rather that people who were not as osessed as she was with the inchoate world mirrored in the newspapers were all out of touch with an awful necessity.
只是那些人不像她一樣癡迷報紙里所影射的未成熟的世界,他們沒有接觸過這樣一種偏執(zhí).
（這復(fù)合句我分層來說吧,but rather that people were all out of touch with an awful necessity,這一句是主干.
who were not as osessed as she was with the inchoate world mirrored in the newspapers 這部分屬于定語從句,解釋說明people,其中的主干是who were not osessed with the inchoate world.
as…as…好理解的吧,引導(dǎo)狀語從句,
the inchoate world mirrored in the newspapers這句呢,是mirror的分詞結(jié)構(gòu)作后置定語,定義the inchoate world）
句子我喜歡意譯,有時不清楚上下文環(huán)境難免譯錯,成分我應(yīng)該說清楚了,要是樓樓覺得翻譯不對可以嘗試自己直譯后重新組句哦!