Here is my Short essay,Please tell me what is the wrong about it.Thank you~
我有一個夢想
在我10歲時,就認(rèn)識了美國鼎鼎大名的皮貨商人皮塞羅,他告訴我人活著就一定要有自己的夢想.他一邊笑著,一邊讓我眺望那片蔚藍(lán)天空,并說道:"美好總是那么遙遠(yuǎn),但是只要我們能夠看見它,就一定會有實現(xiàn)的那么一天." 我瞪大了雙眼,這場景時至今日都不能忘記.
ONE DREAM
when i was ten years old I had knew pisailuo who was the famous furrier in USA.He told me that one person would be have a dream in its lastlife .he smiled and I was told to survey the blue sky."The nice things always far away from us,but we could see it ,and that must be come true one day " he said.i Stared so big eyes that i couldn't forgot the Scene untill today .