直接給修改后的文章(僅供參考).My favourite food which made by my mother is bulgogi.
The beef is marinated with soy sauce and other spices, so it smells very tempting. This food is from Korea and I think it must be delicious.
And my mother is an excellent cook.
One day, I went home. I smelt something is from my house.
As soon as I came home ,I saw my mother is cooking.
Then she finished and showed it tome. Oh , that‘s Bulgogi!
She let me to taste it, and evaluate whether it good or not.
So I ate the much ,it’s really good. But I played a joke that pretend that I’m pain, she was so disapointed.
But suddenly I gave her a smiling face that said “That’s owesome”.
We were happy.
I love my mother so does her cooking.