Good morning everybody!It's my great honor to speak here,and I am very glad to share my topic with you.Then today I'd like to talk something about the plan of my future life in high school.
You may wonder how to plan our life during the three years in high school?As we all know,these time can be regarded as the most important period in our life.
First of all,I think we should learn to relax when we deal with the pressure from the competition and further studies,for a good mentality will help us balance the study and entertainment and stimulate our potential.Secondly,it is important to be flexible in study,instead of being hidebound.You'll find you may save more time than others and won't be afraid the questions are not the same as those you have practised for many times.Then,we are supposed to turn our words into action,because teachers in high school won't urge you to study any more just like before.Therefore,we are pushed to consciously learn,and we must raise any questions when we are confused,otherwise,no one will help you with them.Meanwhile,we should try our best to finish our homework on time.Finally,not only should we treat our study seriously,but also we could properly relax our selves in our spare time.
OK,thank you for listening,that's all.
因為第三段開頭你用到了relax 但是看到hirebound 我覺得你是想表達靈活學習 所以和flexible做了搭配 第一句就更改了一下 和最后一句的意思似乎就有些重復了 你可以再調(diào)整一下 沒有做太大的改動 有些不適當?shù)脑~匯和表達做了簡單的修改 可能也有一些問題 可以提出來一起探討一下 整體來說寫的不錯~好好加油