good morning,ladies and gentlemen,
i am xxx.now i will give you a persuasive speech on how to stop a war.
as we all know,a war consists of soldiers and poiticians.thus if i can persuade soldiers into quitting,i will stop the war.
the first method i have considered is that we should let local people know what leads to the catastrophy.it is undoubted that all of deputed terrotories contain caluable minerals and some of them yield vegetables such as rubber,which in cold climates it is necessary to synthesize by comparatively expensive methods.so we must tell soldiers that they are not fighting for justice but for someone's benefits.
then we should reveal what develop the disaster.when it comes to a war,i have to refer to the weapons.tanks,planes,etc are being made without a single halt in military factories,sent to the frontlines,and destroyed at once.can you imagine how profitable the business is?then what happens if the world come into peace?no one need weapons anymore.the military suppliers will lost countless quanties of money.so whenever and wherever there exists a small scale of conflict,they rapidly come out and agitate illiterate ordinary people to fight for their dignity,country or people for revenge.we have to let all people that in a war,some people earn money,while some people just lose their lives.
finally,we need to improve education systems in that pleaces.it is not difficult to descern that areas eaten up with conflicts contain large quantity of people who are not well-educated and easily manipulated.they are the victims and sacrifices of a war.it is our obligation to teah them how to think and how to strive for their own happiness.
only by telling the public about the intension of those who develop the war and enabling the public to think critically can we stop a conflict,because no one is willing to keep fighting for meaningless aim at the risk of their lives.
Now!look at soldiers of both sides.thwy have the same goal----conquer thr other side and then let the peace return.think that why people who have the same goal have to kill each other?
Now!look at the politacians and soldiers.think that why mistakes made by the last generation should be conpensated for by the young's blood and lives?
that's all thank you for listening.
你讓我一個(gè)在國外的大學(xué)生寫100字的文章我辦不到.我一寫從來都是1000字的.我實(shí)在沒辦法壓縮了.你自己看著辦吧.你的要求是后來告訴我的,我那時(shí)已經(jīng)在打字了.你自己改吧.
我自認(rèn)為寫的還是很有深度的.
別忘了告訴我你們老師評(píng)價(jià)~我已經(jīng)很久沒有被表揚(yáng)啦.哈哈哈