PEP小學(xué)英語五年級上冊各單元作文范例及點評
My English Teacher
Miss Tang is my English teacher.She’s very pretty.She is tall and thin.She has two big eyes and a small mouth.Her hair is long.She likes cats very much.And she likes singing and dancing,too.Her English is very good.We often play games in English classes.She is very kind to us.We all love her.
【要領(lǐng)點評】
這篇作文的題目是“我的英語老師”,是一篇介紹人物的作文.小作者開門見山,直接點題,首先介紹了英語老師的姓名,然后逐一介紹了她的外貌特征、喜好、英語水平、上課特點以及師生情感等.
小朋友們在寫作文時,要注意使用自己最熟悉的詞[組],以免寫出一些錯句子.寫作時要注意意思連貫、語句通順、標(biāo)點正確、書寫清晰、規(guī)范等.
My Days of the week
I’m a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six o’clock every day.I have breakfast at half past six,and go to school at seven o’clock.I have classes from Monday to Saturday.I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday.I don’t have to go to school on school,and I like to go swimming on that day.
【要領(lǐng)點評】
這篇作文的題目是“我的一周”,小作者沒有說一些空話,而是從自己的親身經(jīng)歷寫起,敘述了自己一周七天的所作所為,并特別強調(diào)了星期天的喜好,寫得自然、流暢.
小朋友們寫作文時要注意人稱及謂語動詞的變化,要依據(jù)提示,結(jié)合自己的實際,寫自己身邊熟悉的事情.
My Favourite Food
Do you know what this is?Guess!Its colour is yellow.It’s long and thin.It looks like a small boat and crescent.Oh,it is a banana.Do you know what that is?Guess again!Its colour is orange.It’s round.It looks like a small ball and a small lantern.Oh,it is an orange.I like then a lot.I like ice-creams.I like to chew gum.Chocolates and candies are yummy.I like them very much.
How about you?What’s your favourite food?
【要領(lǐng)點評】
My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章,小作者并不是簡單地列舉出自己最喜歡的每一種食物,而是有詳有略地進行介紹.整篇文章用詞準(zhǔn)確、語言流暢、沒有語法錯誤.另外,文章中出現(xiàn)了一些生詞,可見小作者是用心查字典了.
I can help do housework
I am a girl.My name is Li Ling.I’m in Class Three,Grade Five.I’m helpful at home.I can water the flowers,empty the trash and sweep the floor.After meals,I can help my mother do the dishes.On Sunday,I can wash the clothes.What about you?Are you helpful,too?
【要領(lǐng)點評】
本篇作文的題目是“我可以幫助做家務(wù)”,作者主要敘述自己在家?guī)椭龅氖虑?介紹自己的名字,所在年級及在家能做的家務(wù),很詳細(xì),到位.
小朋友們在寫作時,應(yīng)盡量寫一些親自經(jīng)歷的事情,這樣會避免在作文時顯得太空,因為只有自己經(jīng)常做的事情印象才會特別深刻.寫作時還要注意大小寫和時態(tài).
In The Kitchen
This is the kitchen of my family.It’s big and nice.Look!My mother is cooking in it.This is a microwave and that is a stove.There is a big table here.There are many things on it.What are these?They look yummy!Oh,they’re strawberries.And what are those?They are grapes.
【要領(lǐng)點評】
這篇作文的題目是“在廚房”里,作者根據(jù)自己家的廚房情況.介紹廚房里有微波爐和電爐,有一張大桌子和桌子上的物品等,以及媽媽在做飯,非常真實.
小朋友們,可以從觀察自己身邊的事、物寫起,利用所學(xué)的句子,描述身邊熟悉的東西來訓(xùn)練習(xí)作.
My Village
My village is very beautiful.There are many houses in the village.Near the village,there is a forest.A small river is in front of the village.The water in it is very clean.We can see some fish in the river.Near the river,you can see a mountain.Some flowers and grass are on the mountain.I like my village.Welcome to my village!
【要領(lǐng)點評】
本文以“我的村莊”為題描述了自己家鄉(xiāng)的風(fēng)景.介紹了村莊的房屋、森林、河流及大山,使人看了這篇作文后確實感覺到“我的村莊”的美麗.小朋友們在寫作時,可仔細(xì)想一下自己的村莊或所在城市的特點,盡量使用本單元學(xué)過的單詞或短語進行敘述.