文法有些錯(cuò)誤需要幫你改嗎？好哦Flying是指？夢(mèng)想？還是說你喜歡高空飛翔夢(mèng)想是吧？This opportunity 是指⋯哪個(gè)good morning teachers, my name is Zheng Xi. l am from Chen xi number 1Middle school.l am16 yearsold .My dream is to fly, because l like the sense of floating in the blue sky and traveling trough the clouds. now I have the opportunity torealize my dream, if my dream come true, I will try my best to do it.Although l am not really good at English,I will learn try my best to learn it in the future! I like smiling and enjoy my colorful life. l hope the teachers can give me this opportunity.good morning teachers, my name is Zheng Xi. l am from Chen xi number 1Middle school.l am16 yearsold .My dream is to fly, because l like the sense of floating in the blue sky and traveling trough the clouds. now I have the opportunity torealize my dream, if my dream come true, I will try my best to do it.Although l am not really good at English,I will learn try my best to learn it in the future! I like smiling and enjoy my colorful life. l hope the teachers can give me this opportunity.這個(gè)錯(cuò)了不好意思~有地方?jīng)]注意到?jīng)]事你幫我改下然后盡量剪短一點(diǎn)good morning teachers, my name is Zheng Xi. l am from Chen xi number 1Middle school.l am16 yearsold .My dream is to fly, because l like the sense of floating in the blue sky and traveling trough the clouds. I like to smile and enjoy my life. Thank you這樣呢？這個(gè)可以，就這樣的短，然后大概內(nèi)容說到了就行嗯 那就這樣吧也不要太少了你可以幫我讀一遍嗎？然后翻譯一下幫你改好了啊哦好回家讀行不？大概6點(diǎn)在車上頭有點(diǎn)暈好的沒事我是要去面試然后要基本的口語，我英語太差了所以就要麻煩你了面試??？干嘛的在車上頭有點(diǎn)暈到家了就這樣~慢慢練習(xí)吧好好學(xué)喔加油好的，面試緊張呀為甚麼要面試??？干嘛的好吧 總之加油晚安嗯嗯。謝謝你