英語(yǔ)強(qiáng)人來(lái),請(qǐng)改下我的演講稿,
以下是我的關(guān)于"Australia as we know"的演講稿(可能其中會(huì)有些語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤),改好后請(qǐng)全文發(fā)送.
Australia as we know
Australia,the sixth largest country in the world,stands on Oceania.
In the long history river,Australia once was invaded by Britain.At last,it became the colony of Britain.Of course,Australian couldn't stand it.Therefore,they starded to resist.Finally,they succeeded,and Australia had their own National Day,Jan.26th.
Now,Australia has been listed into the Developed Countries(發(fā)達(dá)國(guó)家,不知道有沒(méi)有拼對(duì)).Inaddition,its population has reached nearly 22 million.In other word,Australia has gone into the developed highway(邁入發(fā)展的快車道,不知道有沒(méi)有對(duì)).
I strongly believe that the cooperation between Australia and China will get further development.As one of the largest countries in the world.These big countries including Ausralia and China will lead the world to go into the new century.
That's all.
Last but no least,I sincerely thank you for your listening.
Thanks!
請(qǐng)問(wèn)為什么我在考試寫作文時(shí)總是得9、10分，上不去，請(qǐng)問(wèn)就這篇文章而言的我的作文有些什么問(wèn)題，該如何去改正