Today I was going to make the business card by myself.日記求指點(diǎn)語法錯(cuò)誤.
首先問一下寫當(dāng)天的日記要用過去時(shí)嗎?用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)可以嗎?
其次請(qǐng)指點(diǎn)一下語法錯(cuò)誤.大概內(nèi)容是說我自己做名片的事情.
Today I was going to make the business card by myself.
Firstly,I needed to design the business card,but i didn't know which software was useful for the business card design.I used the search tools by internet ,then i downloaded several types of appliance setup programs.After I had installed these programs one by one,i tried to open it and use it ,Though about two hours of effort,i found all these programs i had download weren't real work .
I was so disappointed and exhausted.After a short time rest,an idea came into my mind,i could ask the personal who was professional in the business card made,like the seller in taobao.
Though the inquiry from the taobao seller,i knew the CDR software was suitable for business card design.So i got it and used it .
先寫這些,多了怕大家沒耐心看呢.我怎么覺得自己總用after啊,還有別的詞可以替代嗎?