英文商務(wù)信函,
我要給國(guó)外一公司寫(xiě)信,想要合作的啊,以前有過(guò)通信,你們看我這樣寫(xiě)有什么不妥啊.其實(shí)我自己認(rèn)為應(yīng)該再寫(xiě)一些吸引他的內(nèi)容,可是不知道該怎么寫(xiě).對(duì)于對(duì)方來(lái)說(shuō),有更多的讀者是很重要的.
信件如下：
Dear ×××,
This is ×××,founder of ×××.
We’d like to launch a Christmas Promotion event with you.Everyone who participates in the event will get a chance to win Christmas present ranging from big prizes to ××× coupons.This will help attract more readers.
I look forward to hearing from you and in the meantime,if you wish to discuss any points,or need any further information,you may wish to contact me accordingly.
Regards,
×××
×××
親愛(ài)的各位:鑒于前兩位朋友的回答,我想大家恐怕是誤會(huì)了,我不是讓大家翻譯這封信,而是想讓大家看一看這封信應(yīng)該再加些什么內(nèi)容,如何應(yīng)該寫(xiě)的更好!