關(guān)于互聯(lián)網(wǎng)影響人的社交：第一段：As the technologies advanced, more and more peoplebecome more socialize online but communicate less with the actual people aroundthem. Back in time, we chat with our fa...很感謝您！
但是好像有點不符合要求。。
比如說第二篇，能否把在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)普及之前人與人之間的交流方式等寫出來，然后再寫互聯(lián)網(wǎng)普及之后人與人之間的交流方式等。不要一上來就是however，這樣子我沒有辦法按照老師的要求出閱讀題的呀。
您受累，成的話我再加懸賞！
還有什么不明確的可以現(xiàn)在問，我白天沒有時間，明天晚上來收~！再感謝！這樣子對不？
People in the past enjoy outhood activities and social hours within the real world, while the people living in modern period begin to change negaitively.Peoplespend more and more time on internet and social Medias. Once we’re online, we’remostly killing time. Every day after school we rush through all activities and immediatelygo online to chat with those who we might not even know much of. We know nolonger spend our time dealing with the live people, but rather with those whohide their faces behind screens and pretend to be friendly. Our lives are beingstained by the internet as we communicate less and less with real people inreal world.