I'm XXX,I come from XX,I am a assosiate student.I have the ability of good communication and coordination,good responsibility,and I have the abilities of logic analysis and deal with questions.I have once worked in XX department for half a year,then worked in XX department as a technician for more two years,now I am planning to develope in XX Management Department.技術(shù)活怎么說呢？不一定要個技術(shù)員technical works那你再修改一下，前面就不能用AS吧I'm XXX, I come from XX, I am a assosiate student. I have the ability of good communication and coordination, good responsibility, and I have the abilities of logic analysis and deal with questions. I have once worked in XX department for half a year, then worked in XX department and have done some technical works for more two years, now I am planning to develope in XX Management Department.責(zé)任心強要加主語嗎，放在那能獨立成句嗎，影響不不影響，全都加上就太生硬啦。。。ok !thank you不客氣。。。