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廣東地區(qū)考生,小作文滿分15大作文25,請點(diǎn)評給分,
1.課外活動(dòng)時(shí)間：每周一三五4-5pm
2.活動(dòng)項(xiàng)目：體育運(yùn)動(dòng)、閱讀、唱歌、樂器演奏、英語游戲等.
3.最受歡迎的項(xiàng)目：電腦、唱歌、鋼琴
4.學(xué)生的反應(yīng)：喜歡該課外活動(dòng),能放松心情、校園生活更豐富充實(shí)
5.希望和建議：更多課外活動(dòng)時(shí)間,減少作業(yè)量.多組織社會(huì)實(shí)踐.
After-class activities are held from 4pm to 5pm on every Monday.Wednesday and Friday in our school.Physical exercise\reading\singing\musical instrument playing and English games are included.The most popular activities are computers\singing and pianos.The responses of the students indicate that they like these after-class activities for the reason that they can not only relax and refresh their minds but also make their school life more wonderful.We are advised that we should spend more time to do after-class activities and we also hope that we could let students do less homework and organize them to participate in social activities more.
大作文：1.以30詞概括短文內(nèi)容略）
2.120詞談對“學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)錯(cuò)誤由誰改正”的看法,包括：1.你是如何看待自己的語言錯(cuò)誤.2.你的老師如何對待你的語言錯(cuò)誤.3.你對老師的做法持什么看法?為什么?
How to face your language mistakes?
The passage mainly points out that teachers play an incorrect role in children's work judgements and children have the abilities to learn by themselves.Thus,children should correct their mistakes independently.
It reminds me of my own.I always tried to correct my own language mistakes when I was a child.But gradually I found that even after correction I was still wrong because of lacking of experiences compared to the adults.Consequently,I realized that I should also ask my parents or teachers for help.Only in this way can I learn the right language usages.
As for my teacher,she always gives me some tips and let me try to figure the mistakes out by myself instead of point them out directly.I'm approval of it because it can help me gain a better understanding of my mistakes.Furthermore,I can not only realize my faults but also form a good habit of solving problems independently through the correcting process.
In a word,we should combine our own thoughts and our teachers' help together when facing out language mistakes.By doing so,we will gradually find that we have the ability to solve problems by our own one day.