首先標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)用錯(cuò)了好幾處,其次first line of construction有明顯的中式英語(yǔ)的痕跡,還有,大小寫(xiě)寫(xiě)錯(cuò)了幾處.
當(dāng)然了,你讓我找語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤.expose to the weather是錯(cuò)的,應(yīng)該用exposed to the weather能幫我改正一下嗎？We now work in the first line of construction ,exposed to the weather.I feel strongly happy though on-site work is very hard ,because i love my job.I amvery pround of rooting in Hainan island and contributing to the constrction of the aerospace industry for our motherland.我只對(duì)幾個(gè)明顯不合適地方做了改動(dòng)，其他結(jié)構(gòu)也沒(méi)敢亂改。