I want to be a photographer.沒錯(cuò)I love photography,I think that photography is very interesting.沒有連詞的情況下,一句只有一個(gè)主語和謂語,逗號(hào)改句號(hào)I love to shoot the dawn,sunset,rivers,and beautiful scenery.沒錯(cuò)I really enjoyed taking pictures,because it help me record that I like and like my people and things動(dòng)詞錯(cuò)了,enjoy就行,helps,that不能引導(dǎo)賓語從句,意思也重復(fù)了,直接改成 because it helps me record my favourite people and things.