I am budgeting my account .(我正在預算我的賬戶,現(xiàn)在進行時)I am restless for it because I need much dollar （我心緒不寧,因為我需要更多的美元.一般現(xiàn)在時）.(美元的單詞拼寫錯)My mother assessed (一般過去時 我媽媽估計了我的經(jīng)濟狀況非常嚴重) my economic case that was very acute ,but I belived I was competent (competent是能勝任的意思)Getting a job was very significant(very 是副詞修飾形容詞,所以significance改成significant有意義的,虛擬語氣,未發(fā)生的事用過去時態(tài) 但是我相信我可以找一份工作,是很有意義的事情).Consequently I searched for (fot改成for)a job in a rush.（結果我很匆忙地找到了一份工作 一般過去時） My father told me I should work as a (去掉at 改as 加定冠詞a)bank clerk(一般過去時 虛擬語氣,我爸爸告訴我應該做銀行職員).Due to I need more money (錢money),I have to （去掉get ） make money (錢money)efficiently（一般現(xiàn)在時 因為我需要更多的錢,所以不得不盡快地賺到錢）.