幫忙看一下這篇文章有沒有什么錯誤?
幫忙看一下這篇文章有沒有什么錯誤?
Please make good use of your life
Dear leaders teachers and schoolmates.Good morning!
Today,my topic is“take care of your life,please.”
A great person have said:Either you make good use of your life,or your life makes use of you.a good heart is significant,it depends on who is hourse,who is hero.New term begins,you I and everyone else starts a new.This time is different from before.Maybe you haven’t found how hard it is,but there are more and more difficulties.Junior three is here.
Maybe we had successed yesterday,but that has been a good memery.Maybe we were in trouble,but that is the past.Forget it.
Dear schoolmates,study is hard,but don’t complain about the expection who cares of you.We need teaching.The most important thing is wherever we are,we should go ahead.We should dare to show our disadvangtages,make good use of our life.An Amerian president got the bad illness when he was a baby,nobody could understand his words,but he didn’t give up his dream.His activities made him win.
Perfect depends on drops.Education depends on drops.Life also depends on drops.Perfect,education,life will make up the most fascinating song.
As Xingling students we should treasure everyday to study.Let’s make good use of our life.Let’s fight for our bright future!
That’s all.Thank you!
Please make good use of your life
Dear leaders teachers and schoolmates.Good morning!
Today,my topic is“take care of your life,please.”
A great person have said:Either you make good use of your life,or your life makes use of you.a good heart is significant,it depends on who is hourse,who is hero.New term begins,you I and everyone else starts a new.This time is different from before.Maybe you haven’t found how hard it is,but there are more and more difficulties.Junior three is here.
Maybe we had successed yesterday,but that has been a good memery.Maybe we were in trouble,but that is the past.Forget it.
Dear schoolmates,study is hard,but don’t complain about the expection who cares of you.We need teaching.The most important thing is wherever we are,we should go ahead.We should dare to show our disadvangtages,make good use of our life.An Amerian president got the bad illness when he was a baby,nobody could understand his words,but he didn’t give up his dream.His activities made him win.
Perfect depends on drops.Education depends on drops.Life also depends on drops.Perfect,education,life will make up the most fascinating song.
As Xingling students we should treasure everyday to study.Let’s make good use of our life.Let’s fight for our bright future!
That’s all.Thank you!
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優(yōu)質(zhì)解答
第四行:"A great person have said",把have去掉第六行"you I and everyone else starts a new"是個非常奇怪的表述,you和I可以不用寫,這句可改為:"everyone has a new start"同樣是第六行"This time is different f...
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